Although there is a lot of material here, there is a lack of detail which will preclude your getting a mark beyond the bottom of L3. The crucial thing missing is analysis - you need to be really getting into the DNA of this project and, at the moment, I'm not getting a feel for this. Quantity is no measure of quality.
With regard to planning, although you've included a lot of storyboards, these have limited value as you don't really explain the context or how they link to the song (for example, timings in relation to the timing/ lyrics of the song). Also, unless I've missed it, there needs to really be some sort of schedule and possibly shot list evident, since otherwise it is unclear what your aims are and how you will meet the deadlines.
I would also hope to see far more detail with regard to your print analysis. The magazine covers are interesting, but how do they help with your brief? What ideas are you lifting from them?
Furthermore, you need to clearly and unambiguously deconstruct the magazine adverts. How do they work? What elements will you include? Why? How will you replicate or subvert conventions? You need to cross-reference this to the work you and Chloe are doing (you must comment on and link to her blog, since you are a working partnership).
Similarly, I need to see a lot more consideration of raw videos/ cd covers etc. You need to really map the genre/ media language landscape, to explain the context/ inspiration behind your work. You need to link your developing planning into this - how is your work meeting the needs of existent work? How are your ideas evolving?
At the moment, the lack of detail is characterising your blog, and you need to rectify this. You can obviously edit and touch up existing posts, which I would advise, but you might also want to include new posts along the line I have suggested. I would hope to see this developing swiftly.
Although there is a lot of material here, there is a lack of detail which will preclude your getting a mark beyond the bottom of L3. The crucial thing missing is analysis - you need to be really getting into the DNA of this project and, at the moment, I'm not getting a feel for this. Quantity is no measure of quality.
ReplyDeleteWith regard to planning, although you've included a lot of storyboards, these have limited value as you don't really explain the context or how they link to the song (for example, timings in relation to the timing/ lyrics of the song). Also, unless I've missed it, there needs to really be some sort of schedule and possibly shot list evident, since otherwise it is unclear what your aims are and how you will meet the deadlines.
I would also hope to see far more detail with regard to your print analysis. The magazine covers are interesting, but how do they help with your brief? What ideas are you lifting from them?
Furthermore, you need to clearly and unambiguously deconstruct the magazine adverts. How do they work? What elements will you include? Why? How will you replicate or subvert conventions? You need to cross-reference this to the work you and Chloe are doing (you must comment on and link to her blog, since you are a working partnership).
Similarly, I need to see a lot more consideration of raw videos/ cd covers etc. You need to really map the genre/ media language landscape, to explain the context/ inspiration behind your work. You need to link your developing planning into this - how is your work meeting the needs of existent work? How are your ideas evolving?
At the moment, the lack of detail is characterising your blog, and you need to rectify this. You can obviously edit and touch up existing posts, which I would advise, but you might also want to include new posts along the line I have suggested. I would hope to see this developing swiftly.