Well here is a full version of the video, complete with all effects and changes prior to the last upload, not to mention it is actually complete. There is still a couple of things that need tweeking but for the most part it is pretty much the final thing.
It's a little hard to see, because you've got such high compression on it.
ReplyDelete0:15 - you should edit out the first few frames of the shot of Greg running away from the camera as it looks like you're just starting to move. There are two or three like this - watch out for them.
Some of the editing is still off the beat (for example, the drums at about the 2 min mark). You should watch it through a few times and try and get edits like this in time with the tempo, for stylistic effect.
What's the "hello" at the end?
I think the final shot should be more like the last shot of "The Evil Dead", starting a lot further away and moving a lot more quickly.
This is still pretty good, and certainly L3/4 border. You could get it into L4 by making the editing slicker and tidying up the end.